- Read the full question
- Remember to do your own research in addition
- Make sure your examples are relevant
Example 1:
"Cameras purchased today are 99% of the time going to be digital, which can be very beneficial to movie companies as it means that the end movie/clips can be digitally rendered as a smaller video file making it easier and cheaper to get the movie out to more cinemas as it helps reduce the cost for the way it will be stored (on a USB rather than an external hard drive."
Problems:
Problems:
- 99% is not a valid statistic, just another way in saying "majority"
- No use of word "Distribution" when talking about getting movies to cinemas
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