Feedback for Trial Exam - Age within a TV Drama

For my essay on the representation of age with the TV Drama extract "Monarch of Glen" I was given the following feedback.

- Weak on Terminology (Only used "cut" when referring to editing)

- Only referred to costume when referring to Mise-en-scene

- Must link representations to micro elements (have a tendency to describe narrative events)

- Give range of examples

- Good writing on camera